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Letter of Feedback – Exhibition

Dear Sir or Madam,

I have recently been to the local art exhibition “Art in our Time” that you organized in the Town Hall. Although I enjoyed the exhibition very much I have some suggestions that you may find useful to improve the next one.

Firstly, in my opinion, a charge of £ 5.00 for the ticket is too expensive. More people would come if the admission was cheaper, if not free at least for students.

Secondly, I don’t think the Town Hall is the best place for holding an exhibition. There are wide spaces but the light conditions were not always ideal. The Art Gallery would be perfect since it is already equipped for such events.

I appreciated very much the fact that there were pieces of art of different values so that everyone could find some he/she was able to afford. Although not every piece of work was excellent to my likings, there were some lovely sculptures and for example, I was able to buy two of them thanks to their low prices.

In conclusion, I would like to say that I was satisfied with the exhibition and I think that next year with little changes and improvements it could be even better organized.

Yours faithfully,
Xxx

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