daddo--093
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oi ciao a tt potete correggermi questo testo che avevo da fare per casa e per domani devo imparlo a memoria (corretto però ) :

3 days ago ,on the 31th of february john a small child of 5 years has been abducted from a shopping centre in London.He was in a toys shop with his parents when arrived a kidnapper who abducted him and asked a ransom of 1 millions of euros.the parents went to the police who sent a lot of troops in London.The parents also promised a reward at who carried back their son.after 2 days of scare,a young boy of 20 years carried back their son and the parents do a party for thank the boy.the young child was escape. and he found him in the toys shop where the kidnapper abducted him.the young boy who found the small child will receive ....(100 mila euro nn so come si dice).

nn credo sia molto corretto..aiutatemi..con tempi preposizioni..tutto..

sqklaus
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daddo--093: oi ciao a tt potete correggermi questo testo che avevo da fare per casa e per domani devo imparlo a memoria (corretto però ) :

3 days ago ,on the 31th of february, john a small child of 5 years has been abducted from a shopping centre in London.He was in a toys shop with his parents when a kidnapper arrived (il soggetto wa sempre per primo !!! )who abducted him and asked a ransom of 1 millions of euros.the parents went to the police who sent a lot of "cops" or "policemen" (troops sono i militari dell'esercito )in London.The parents also promised a reward to whoever(eventualmente dovresti mettere whom) carried back their son.after 2 days of scare,a young boy of 20 years carried back their son and the parents gave a party to thank the boy.the young child had flown his captor (eventualmente escaped from ). and he found him in the toys shop where the kidnapper had abducted him.the young boy who found the small child will receive ....(about one hundred thousand euros )

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