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omy_08
omy_08 - Erectus - 120 Punti
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This year I spent all my summer in Morocco, in fact on 15th August I was there. Moroccan people don't celebrate Ferragosto like Italians, so I didn't do anything special that day. I got up at 11 like everyday, and I didn't have breakfast because in that period of time there was Ramadan, therefore I couldn't eat. Next I studied a little and surfed in Internet. At 4pm I went back home to help my mother and eat. In Ramadan people don't go the day, because it' hot and they can drink nothing, so they prefer go out the evening till midnight. At 8pm I went out with mu cousine to McDonald. I got a McChiken and an ice-cream. When we finished to eat, we walked in the longest avenue of Fes. 3 hours later I come back to home. This was my day the 15th August.


Vi ringrazio anticipamente.

A_Genn
A_Genn - Eliminato - 901 Punti
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Ho provato anche io a correggerlo. :dozingoff


This year I spent all my summer in Morocco, in fact on 15th August I was there. Moroccan people don't celebrate Ferragosto like Italians, so I didn't do anything so special that day. I got up at 11 o'clock like everyday, and I didn't have breakfast because in this period of time there was Ramadan, therefore I couldn't eat. Next I studied a little bit and surfed the net. At 4 o'clock p.m. I went back home to help my mother and have dinner. When there is Ramadan, people don't go away, because it' hot and they can't drink , so they prefer go out the evening untill midnight. At 8 o'clock p.m. I went out with my cousine to McDonald. I took a McChiken and an ice-cream. When we finished to eat, we walked in the longest avenue of Fes. 3 hours later I come back home. This was my 15th August Day.

tiscali
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This year I spent all summer in Marocco. In fact on August 15th I was there. Moroccan people don't celebrate Ferragosto (in inglese Ferragosto si dice: 15th August) like italians, so I didn't do anything of special that day. I got up at 11 o'clock everyday, and I didn't have breakfast because in this period there was Ramadan, therefore I couldn't eat. Next I studied a little bit and surfed on internet. At 4 pm I went at home to helping my mother and eat. People don't go to Ramadan, because it's hot and they can't drink anything, so they prefer to go out the evening till midnight. At 8 pm I went out with my cousine to McDonald. I got a Mcchiken and an ice cream. When we finished eating, we walked in the longest avenue of Fes, and 3 hourse later I came back to home. It has been my 15th August.

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Until vuole una L non due :)
Comunque ho cercato e penso siano corrette entrambe: sia till che until :D

mitraglietta
mitraglietta - Mito - 62632 Punti
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Su next I studied volevo aggiungere a little bit, ma non ero sicuro. mi pare che comunque andasse bene, non ci sono troppi errori.

Nella frase they prefer to go out the evening untill -> che vuol dire fino alla
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