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laila10
laila10 - Sapiens - 317 Punti
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I think my school is quite environmentally friendly as we make the separate collection and inside the temperature is quite right. However the lights are on even when we don't use and in the machines are junk foods instead of fruits. Next my school has to promote new ideas, for examples: have a go-green-week and ask students to plant one tree or hold a flower-show, so students will get to learn more about Botany and will become eco-friendly on the other side. Finally I would my school is involved in eco-schools project and hold a seminares to motivated its students.
Suzy90
Suzy90 - Moderatore - 9412 Punti
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Ciao! Ti segnalo alcuni errori che ho visto:
"I think my school is quite environmentally friendly as we make the recycling and inside the temperature is quite right. However the lights are on even when we don't use (the rooms/the school) and in the automatic machines there are junk foods instead of fruits. In the future my school has to promote new ideas, for example: have a go-green-week and ask students to plant one tree or hold a flower-show, so students will learn more about Botany and will become eco-friendly. Finally I would like my school to be involved in eco-school projects and hold seminares to motivate its students."
Per il resto mi sembra a posto!
:hi!
laila10
laila10 - Sapiens - 317 Punti
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come sempre gentilissima♥

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