NannySmile
NannySmile - Ominide - 45 Punti
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Ciao ragazzi mi potete aiutare a correggere questo testo di inglese??? *-* pleaaseee

This summer was one of the best even though I spent mostly in Aosta Valley, I enjoyed very much with my parents and my friends. In late July I went to Calabria to visit my relatives and friends of those areas, but especially because my cousin Claudia got married. I was in Calabria one week but I
But I did many things : I participated in some beach parties and festivals in the country of my relatives, I went all'acquafans every morning, I went to the beach with my mother and I attended as I said to my cousin's wedding.
When I returned to Aosta Valley I staied a long time with my friends,I had some wonderful afternoons and evenings with them. My favorite night was when we went to see the stars in a park.
In afternoon, sometimes, I went in swimming pool too and I went also to make outings or I stay in the streets of Aosta.

GRAZIE ANTICIPATAMENTE (:

tiscali
tiscali - Tutor - 23088 Punti
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This summer has been one of the best ever, though I spent mostly of the time in Aosta Valley, I enjoyed so much with my parents and my friends. In late July I went to Calabria for visiting my relatives and my friends of those areas, but especially because my cousin Claudia got married. I've been in Calabria one week, but I did many things: I partecipated to some beach parties and festivals in the country of my relatives. I used to go to (acquafans non si dice, ti inserisco "parco acquatico se può andar bene) water park every morning, then I went to the beach with my mother and I attended as I said to my cousin's weeding. When I returned in Aosta Valley I stayed for a long time with my friends, I had some wonderful afternoons and evenings with them. My favourite night has been when we went to see the stars in the park. In the afternoon, sometimes, I went in swimming pool too and I went also to make outings or I stayed in the street of Aosta.

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