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aannttoo
aannttoo - Ominide - 40 Punti
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devo fare una e-mail in inglese nella quale devo parlare di un mio amico.. seguendo questi punti:
-age,family,work/study
-personality (good side)
-hobbies and interests
-any negative things?
è uguale d quale persona parlate.. basta ke nn sia corto e ke rispetti i 4 punti... grazie 1000 a ki mi aiutera! e a buon rendere! ;)
plateosaurus97
plateosaurus97 - Erectus - 148 Punti
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:blind Ciao, sono andato un po' alla cieca ma questa potrebbe esserti utile..


Hi Zoe, how are you?
I spent the winter holidays really fantastic. You know, I met a really smart guy, his name is Gary, and he is fourteen years old.
He lives in south London with his mum, his twin sister and his younger brother. He's taller than his sister.
He has got short black hair and brown eyes. He goes to Springdale Comprehensive School, he's in Year 9. He loves Art and Geography but he's terrible at Franch and History. He likes rap and fish and chips! He's not very sporty but he's crazy about football. He's supports Manchester United! He is really nice, and makes jokes about people who love cricket, says it's a stupid sport for stupid people!
It is also very generous and funny, always happy and playful, very good at skiing but his fatal flaw is laziness, think that will stop a lot of times in the middle of the track and lies down on the snow, pretending to fall just to stand still in rest, thus risking to be investing: it's really crazy!

Bye, for now,
:!!! che ne pensi?????

bye bye
tiscali
tiscali - Tutor - 23020 Punti
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Il brano va bene, aggiungo delle piccole correzioni.

Nelle frasi:
-"He lives in south London with his mum, his twin sister", aggiungi la S, perchè sono 2.

-"but he's terrible at Franch" ---> French.

-"He's supports Manchester United!" non c'è bisogno del verbo essere, pertanto diventa:
He supports Manchester United.

-"He is really nice, and makes jokes about people who love cricket, says it's a stupid sport for stupid people!" il verbo "says" lo trasformerei al present continuous, secondo me rende meglio, pertanto riscrivendola è:

-"He is really nice, and makes jokes about people who love cricket, sayING it's a stupid sport for stupid people!"
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