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BlackAngel
BlackAngel - Genius - 2009 Punti
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Ciao ragazzi,
sono disperata!! Devo consegnare per domani un riassunto di un viaggio in inglese e vorrei sapere se qualcuno potrebbe genilmente controllarmi gli errori grammaticali per favore:

Summary of journey.
I realized one of my dreams two years ago: I visited London. I stayed here two week in Goldsmiths' College with people that I never meet before. I have seen beautiful places like Greenwich, National Maritime Museum, Central Park, Buckingham Palace, House of Parlament, Big Ben, Trafalgar Square, The National Gallery, Canterbury Cathedral, The Globe, Millennium Bridge, British Museum, Sea Life and Cambridge: all places are beautiful and interesting and I never forgot them. I miss Antonio's quips about Margaret(or the "Queen";) and Valentino(or "Gigino";), the evening in disco and the "country evening"( during that, the girls were wearing like a boy and the boys were wearing like a girl), Mattia's telephonic joke, that would forced me to disconnect the phone, if I wanted to sleep, Olga and Anna two Russian girls that I have met in disco, the fight with hunger, the shopping for streets of London and the evening spent to Tower Bridge, chatting between us.
THe best thing that I never forgot is the cake that Antonio had brought for my seventeen birthday: it had be a beautiful surprise. I will be sorry if I forget someone or something, but I'm very sad and I don't want to cry. Thank you so much for this experience: I hope to meet my friends agai... I miss you!!

GRAZIE MILLE IN ANTICIPO!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :blowkiss
sqklaus
sqklaus - Genius - 8285 Punti
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Summary of journey.
I realized one of my dreams two years ago: I visited London. I stayed here two week in Goldsmiths' College with people that I never
[math]had never met[/math]
before. I have seen beautiful places like Greenwich, National Maritime Museum, Central Park, Buckingham Palace, House of Parliament, Big Ben, Trafalgar Square, The National Gallery, Canterbury Cathedral, The Globe, Millennium Bridge, British Museum, Sea Life and Cambridge: all places are beautiful and interesting and I never
[math]forgot (vuoi dire che non te li sei scordati finor , o che te li ricorderai per sempre ??? )[/math]
them. I miss Antonio's quips about Margaret(or the "Queen";) and Valentino(or "Gigino";), the evening in disco and the "country evening"( during that, the girls were dressed like a boy and the boys were dressed like a girl), Mattia's telephonic joke, that would force me to disconnect the phone, if I wanted to sleep, Olga and Anna two Russian girls that I have met in disco, the fight with hunger, the shopping
[math]thru [/math]
streets of London and the evening spent to Tower Bridge, chatting between us.
THe best thing that I never forgot is the cake that Antonio had brought for my seventeen
[math]th[/math]
birthday: it had be
[math]en[/math]
a beautiful surprise. I will be sorry if I forget someone or something, but I'm very sad and I don't want to cry. Thank you so much for this experience: I hope to meet my friends agai
[math]n[/math]
... I miss you!!
GRAZIE MILLE IN ANTICIPO!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :blowkiss
la maggior parte degli erori non sono di grammatica ma di semplice ortografia , però alcune delle cose che dici non sono chiarissime
e quando parli della torta , secondo me dovresti dire it WAS non it had been , il continuous tense ha significato diverso dal passato prossimo italiano
inoltre realize in inglese ha il senso di costruitre o di comprendere , realizzare un sogno si dice "fulfill a dream "
amandak249
amandak249 - Habilis - 233 Punti
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Ciao! :) Sono madre lingua inglese :) , e per dire la verita' non ci sono tanti errori! Brava! Ho trovato qualche errore, ma niente di grave :)



I realized one of my dreams two years ago: I visited London. I stayed there two weeks in Goldsmiths' College with people that I had never met before. I saw some beautiful places like Greenwich, the National Maritime Museum, Central Park, Buckingham Palace, the House of Parliament, Big Ben, Trafalgar Square, The National Gallery, Canterbury Cathedral, The Globe, Millennium Bridge, British Museum, Sea Life and Cambridge: all of the places were beautiful and interesting and I’ll never forget them. I miss Antonio's quips about Margaret (or the "Queen" and Valentino, or "Gigino";), the evening in disco and the "country evening"( during that, the girls were dressed like boys and the boys were dressed like girls), Mattia's telephonic joke, that he would force me to disconnect the phone, if I wanted to sleep, Olga and Anna two Russian girls that I have met in disco, the fight with hunger, the shopping streets of London and the evening spent at the Tower Bridge, and the chatting between us.

The best thing that I never forgot is the cake that Antonio brought for my seventeen birthday: it was a beautiful surprise. I will be sorry if I forget someone or something, but I'm very sad and I don't want to cry. Thank you so much for this experience: I hope to meet my friends again... I miss you!!
BlackAngel
BlackAngel - Genius - 2009 Punti
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Grazie ragazzi siete sempre i migliori!! :blowkiss
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