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Gillette
Gillette - Sapiens - 382 Punti
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Salve a tutti ho bisogno di una vostra mano nel correggere ed evidenziare gli errori commessi da me in questo breve testo che parla delle mie vacanze estive dell'anno scorso.Grazie.
Ecco il testo:
Last summer I went with my family and my uncles seaside holidays.
we were really excited, everything went well from the start.
we were on holiday in San Salvo it was a great place
the sea was fantastic and the beach a little small but nice.
First of all, I knew more new friends and I stayed with them at the beach playing and having fun together during the day.
We also used to meet us at the night in the disco of the city, which is very popular.
I remember the evenings spent in the company of my friends and family to roast and eat
I also remember a bad time of my holiday to departures and farewells

{Zahra}
{Zahra} - Eliminato - 11670 Punti
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Kikka, se non ne sei sicura, non rispondere, perche' in realta' di errori ce ne sono.

Ecco il testo corretto:

Last summer I went to the seaside with my family (and uncles). We were all really excited, we went to San Salvo, it’s a great place. The sea was fantastic and the beach was nice, but a little small.
I made new friends and even played with them on the beach during my holidays. I often stayed with them actually, I had great fun. We also used to meet up at night to go to the disco, a very popular one, together.
I remember the evenings spent in their company well. I also remember how me and my family sat and ate together. I haven’t forgotten the horrible farewells and departure either.
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